Matt Bellamy

This is a really thoughtful, subtle poem. I had to think about it quite a bit, and I guess people could get different meanings out of it, which I love. ...

You describe the things you have done very well in this poem. It makes it easy to picture everything that's going on. I'm not sure I like the ending. I ...

I think this poem is very good, but it's a poem written to someone, and because you're not talking to me, I can't get as much out of it as ...

Hi! This poem is simple and effective, and I really like it. Your rhyming scheme is very good, not forced at all, and I like your description. I've never tried ...

Hi! This is interesting. I like how you started it, though I'm not sure what you meant by the last two lines of the first stanza. In the second stanza, ...

I like this, it is pretty creepy. However, the rhyming seems a little forced in places so watch out for that. Make sure that you're saying something because it's an ...

Hello! This is quite nice, I like the concept. However, I think you could improve the rhyming - some of it sounds pretty forced and obvious, or simple - past ...

I'm not sure what to make of this. Your description is good, it is pretty well written. But I'm not really sure what the main point is, or what the ...

Aww! I'm sure there are many, many, many people who agree with you there. :)

Hi! This is a good start, but you need...more. We need to know more about who Alec is, etc. And you told us you put your slippers on, but you ...

I'm gonna go ahead and move this to Randomness, since it's not an original piece of work. :)

The thing I like most about this poem is the ending. I think that if you were to put more of this image - of fire and burning, etc, perhaps ...

Haha! I love the ending of this! Actually, I started reading it thinking you were a moth. :P I think "bad" should be "badly". I like the way you said ...

I do like this! And I think a lot of people will be able to relate to it, which is great. :D I think some parts, like "oh man" and ...

I really like how this poem starts. But I'm not sure what it is, but I don't really like the bits about the pages. I don't know why. I think ...